In the world of writing, the story is King but dialogue is the Queen. This is especially true for scripts. And remember, in the game of chess, the Queen has the full range of movement. Dialogue should be spicy, humorous, emotional and contain hidden meaning (subtext). Readers and viewers want to be entertained, surprised and tickled. Dialogue is not normal conversation.
My advice to new writers – really listen to people when they speak. Casual conversations contain contractions, hesitations and slang. Each character should sound different so create character profiles of their education, flaws, personalities, likes and dislikes. The kiss of death is when each character sounds alike. Get into the head/mindset of each character and the dialogue will flow like a waterfall.
Script Evaluations /Coverage cost $50 for a sitcom, $70 for a drama TV series, $100 for a feature under 120 pages and $125 for a feature 120 pages and over. Please allow two weeks for the written evaluation of story concept/structure, characters, script beginning and ending, formatting, dialogue, grammar and genre. You will receive a rating of each category. Please include your name, e-mail and phone number on the title page of your script. Use Paypal for paymentthen send your script to me.
Feature Script cost of $100.00
Longer Feature Script over 120 pages cost of $125.00
TV SItcom script cost of $50.00
Drama TV script cost of $70.00
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I’ve been a closet writer all my life but decided to become a working writer ten years ago. Since then some of my short scripts have been developed into films and I’ve grabbed a few screenwriting awards for best thriller and best comedy scripts.
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